Poetry Monday: “Apple Pie with Synonym”

September 2, 2012 33 Comments by Renee M. LaTulippe

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HAPPY SEPTEMBER! 

It’s lovely to be back now that fall is in the air. Summer was long and hot, and I’m looking forward to baking apple pies and making apple sauce and baking apples, and…doing other non-apple-related activities.

Now sit down, grab an apple, and let’s catch up…

There’s some new stuff in progress here at No Water River. I had BIG PLANS for my five weeks off from blogging, but I was so busy thinking about apples that I only made the tiniest dent in my to-do list. Over on your right you’ll see that I made some BIG BUTTONS to help people find their way around, and up top I’ve added drop-down menus to the navigation bar. For the poetry video library, that means people can see all the videos available, or narrow it down to videos of my original poems, or videos of poems by guest poets, or videos of classic poems. The sidebar buttons go to the entire post, complete with interviews and extension activities.

I’ve also added a RESOURCES section, which is still woefully unfinished. Step carefully, as there are loose screws and ladders strewn about. When it’s done, it will contain a really big list of children’s poets and pages for poetic forms and terms. Working on it!

On the writing front, I’ve been doing a little experimenting and horizon expanding, spurred on by the Summer Short & Sweets series of writing prompts on Susanna Leonard Hill’s blog (a series she’ll thankfully be continuing throughout the year). My go-to form is the ballad verse because I love creating characters and telling little stories, like “Scaredy Cats” and “Tiny Tina Tinseltooth.” But I’ve been feeling the need to break free, so I’ve been dabbling in various forms, writing shorter poems, and playing with language. The poem parodies I recently posted also did wonders for freeing up the right side of my brain — I highly recommend giving parody a chance!

I’m not quite ready to debut a villanelle — and I didn’t stray too far in today’s poem — but I did try to have some fun with language and “write tight” in a shorter form. I hope you like them apples, and please do not crunch loudly during the presentation.

(Can’t see the video? REFRESH your screen or watch it on YouTube here!) 

APPLE PIE WITH SYNONYM

apple pie with synonym
smothered in vanilla ice cream

took some on a picnic
down by the backyard stream

sliced a thick slice, really big
set it on a wrapkin

had three bites and heard a buzz–
bumblebees attackin’!

jumping, thumping, “Buzz off, bees!”
sat down, flusterated

reached for apple pie…not there?
antonyms must’a ate it

Extension Activities: “Apple Pie with Synonym”

NEXT WEEK: David L. Harrison and some cowboys!

Just add synonym!

Video Location: Apple Pie Avenue, Tuscany.

See more poems in my poetry video library.
 
“Apple Pie with Synonym” Copyright © 2012 Renée M. LaTulippe. All rights reserved.  

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32 Comments

  1. Linda Baie
    5 years ago

    I think you were so clever in the synonym/antonym beginning & ending of the poem, Renee. And I like the idea of working out new words is fun, & will be good to share with students. I expect they will get flusterated, but that’s okay, that means good thinking, too! I like all your new buttons, & the drop down menus. You have been working! Thanks for the poem.

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    • Renee M. LaTulippe
      5 years ago

      Thanks, Linda. Making up new words is great fun – I think students would enjoy the exercise!

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  2. Susanna Leonard Hill
    5 years ago

    Excellent poem, Renee! Love it! Also love autumn and all things apple, especially baked things apple! I really like your big buttons and your drop down menus and I’m totally jealous because I can’t figure out how to do them on blogger!

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    • Renee M. LaTulippe
      5 years ago

      There must be a button to push somewhere on Blogger that will give you drop-downs, Susanna! I admit, I had to fiddle with it a bit to get it to work here… Have some pie – that usually solves everything.

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  3. Genevieve
    5 years ago

    The site looks good. The poem sounds good. Apple pie tastes good. And fall feels good. Why don’t I say good a few more times?

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  4. Catherine Johnson
    5 years ago

    What a super idea, that’s brilliant, Renee! I look forward to browsing your site for poems I’ve missed when the kids are in school 🙂

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  5. Erik This Kid Reviews Books
    5 years ago

    Love it! 😀 Now I want some apple pie!

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  6. Beth Stilborn
    5 years ago

    What fun! Delicious poem, Renee, and it looks as though No Water River is in apple pie order. Well done!

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  7. Penny Klostermann
    5 years ago

    Watch out for those antonyms!
    They’re tricky little gems!
    Any chance they have to eat
    a synonym–it’s such a treat!

    Lovin’ the new doodaddies on your website!!! And your poem is so creative, as usual. Delightful!

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    • Pam
      5 years ago

      Penny, how do you do that? You’re amazing, what a talent!

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      • Renee M. LaTulippe
        5 years ago

        Pam, didn’t you know Penny eats, sleeps, and breathes rhyme? She’s a maniac!

        Penny, thanks for the fabulous ditty!

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  8. Pam
    5 years ago

    So this is what five weeks of not having the time to really work on a project looks like? The graphics on the buttons are quite nice. I love how your resource page is progressing. There will be lots of clicking on that page, I’m sure. Now for your poem, I love it! It is such fun! What a super activity for kids. They love creating new words! Love what you’ve done. Great job, Renee!

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    • Renee M. LaTulippe
      5 years ago

      Well, I just have lots of other ideas to make the site as useful as possible, but my free time is what it is! Sigh, little by little.

      So glad you enjoyed the poem and activity ideas. I think kids would hve fun with it!

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  9. Robyn Hood Black
    5 years ago

    Brava! I’ve been sneaking peeks at your site the last few weeks, trying to stay out of the way of the saws and extension cords and boards and such. It looks wonderful!

    Thanks for sharing this perfect ready-for-fall poem. I like them apples, a lot! Really clever. (And I’m wanting to pick those little black and white apple graphics, too….)
    :0)

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    • Renee M. LaTulippe
      5 years ago

      Aren’t those graphics cute? Thanks for picking your way through the mess – glad you enjoyed the apples!

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  10. Dana Carey
    5 years ago

    Cinnamon is hard enough to say– never mind synonym. I think I’ll be mixing them up from now on but it was worth watching you recit your fun poem. Loved the surprise ending!

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  11. Irene Latham
    5 years ago

    Renee, your poem is crisp and clean and juicy and a little tart, just the way an apple should be! I love “flusterated” and oh you got me with those antonyms in the last stanza. Well done! I also love the big buttons. There is always SOMETHING to be done, isn’t there? just don’t let it keep you from this very important work: you, writing poems. xo

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    • Renee M. LaTulippe
      5 years ago

      @ Dana – Merci, mon amie! (ma amie?) How do you say cinnamon in French?

      @ Irene – So true, all the little picky things take SO much time. You’re right though — better a little disarray than no new poems! Thanks for you kind words!

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  12. Hannah Holt
    5 years ago

    LOL! Synonym is my favorite spice, especially when my four year old asks for it.

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    • Renee LaTulippe
      5 years ago

      Funny, I didn’t see this spice listed in your recent book…a terrible oversight, Hannah!

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  13. Short Poems
    5 years ago

    You have expressed it very beautifully

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  14. Iza Trapani
    5 years ago

    Oh you clever little wordsmith! I love the poem! And the new buttons are great. I applesolutely mean it 🙂

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    • Renee LaTulippe
      5 years ago

      Aaaaaand…..she’s back! Missed you, Iza! You’re the apple of my eye, and that’s no crapple!

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  15. Matt Forrest
    5 years ago

    You deserve an ‘A’ just for the title alone – terrific! And so app-ropos with fall arriving soon. (We both must be in ‘food’ mode today!)

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  16. Vikram Madan
    5 years ago

    ‘Wrapkins’ is my new favorite word for today. 🙂

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    • Renee M. LaTulippe
      5 years ago

      Thanks, Matt and Vikram! You make a gal blush.

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      • Janet F.
        5 years ago

        Here in CNY apple country this poem will be a hit with many teachers. Sorry so late in checking this post!! Teachers are in for some amazing treats here with your creative and enticing work, Renee! Merci! Can’t wait to share this with my friends.

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        • Renee LaTulippe
          5 years ago

          Oh, how I miss apple picking! Just made some apple crisp yesterday. ‘Tis the season! Thank you so much for sharing the poem, Janet – I’m so glad you enjoyed it.

          Reply

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